Absolutely Thrilling: Read an Extract from The Proving Ground by Michael Connelly

Absolutely Thrilling: Read an Extract from The Proving Ground by Michael Connelly

To some it’s a stage. A place where carefully choreographed drama takes place. To others, a chess match with moves designed and practiced weeks and sometimes months in advance. Where nothing is left to chance. Where the wrong moves have grave consequences and finality. Where the recruited audience sits in silent judgment with their hidden biases and contempt.

I have never thought of it that way. To me it’s the Octagon, where mixed martial arts are deployed in brutal combat. Two go in; one comes out the victor. No one is left unbloodied. No one is left unscarred. This is what the courtroom is to me.

The hearing on this day was in civil court, a misnomer if there ever was one. There was nothing remotely civil about this fight. Randolph versus Tidalwaiv Technologies LLC was one of those rare cases where the stakes went far beyond the walls of the courtroom or even the reach of the federal court for the Central District of California. This was a fight for the future of everyone — or at least that was how I would argue it.

It was a pretrial hearing before US district court judge Margaret Ruhlin. I had known her since her days as a member of the local defense bar, back when she was called Peggy Ruhlin and hung out after court hours at the bar at the Redbird. She was now a veteran and much respected jurist appointed to the bench during the Obama years. She had consolidated cross- complaints from the parties and was attempting to avoid a trial delay by refereeing the disputes. I was in favour of that but the lawyers at the other table, the Mason brothers, would have liked nothing better than to push the trial off for another few months or more. Tidalwaiv was for sale and its investors were hoping one of the big techs would swallow it. The three Ms were circling — Microsoft, Meta, and Musk. This trial and its outcome could be the difference between millions and billions.

I was determined not to let them delay. Tidalwaiv had turned over twelve terabytes of discovery — enough when printed out to literally line the walls of a warehouse with fi le boxes. But what was important in those thousands and thousands of pages was heavily redacted, making the documents virtually useless to me. I needed to find what they were hiding in those pages or I was going to lose the most important case of my life.

The judge was patiently waiting for my response to one of the Masons, who had stood up and claimed that the redactions in the discovery materials were necessary because of proprietary protections in the very competitive world of generative artificial intelligence. He said that the information withheld from me amounted to the keys to the kingdom. And they weren’t going to give them away.

“Mr. Haller,” the judge prompted. “Your response, please.”

“Yes, Your Honor,” I said.

Following the judge’s courtroom protocol, I stood and went to the lectern located between the tables for the plaintiff and the defendant.

“Your Honor, the defense’s argument is specious at best,” I began.

“We are not talking about the keys to the kingdom here. We’re talking about key evidence that is being withheld because, as Mr. Mason well knows, it is inculpatory. It supports the plaintiff’s case. Tidalwaiv’s creation told an impressionable young man to take his father’s gun to school and — ”

“Mr. Haller,” the judge interrupted. “It is not necessary for you to repeat your cause of action with every objection. I am sure the media you invited here today appreciates it, but the court does not.”

The judge gestured toward the front row of the gallery, where members of the media sat shoulder to shoulder. Cameras and recording devices were not allowed in federal court. Each reporter, even the TV people, was reduced to taking notes by hand. And at the end of the row was a courtroom artist sketching yours truly for CNN. Pen and paper seemed so antiquated in a world where the electronic media reigned, along with its co-conspirators artificial intelligence and the internet.

“Thank you, Judge,” I said. “The point is, this case is about guardrails. Tidalwaiv says they had guardrails in place but won’t reveal them, because they are allegedly proprietary. That doesn’t wash, Your Honor. The plaintiff is entitled to understand how Tidalwaiv’s artificial- intelligence- generated creation jumped those guardrails and told a teenager it was okay to shoot people.”

The Masons stood up in unison to object. They were alone at the defense table, their client choosing not to send a representative to court for these pretrial skirmishes.

The twins conferred and then Marcus sat down, leaving Mitchell to state their argument.

“Your Honor, the plaintiff’s attorney is once again misstating the facts and evidence,” he said. “He is talking to the media, not the court.”

I quickly shot back, since I was still at the lectern.

“How do we know the facts and evidence if they won’t provide complete discovery materials?” I asked, my arms out wide. Ruhlin held her hands up in a signal for silence.

“Enough,” she said. “Mr. Mason, please move to the lectern.”

I retook my seat next to my client, Brenda Randolph, who had tears on her cheeks. Any reference made in court to her murdered child brought tears. It wasn’t a show. It wasn’t coaching. It was genuine loss and grief that would never go away no matter what happened down the line in this courtroom. I reached over and put my hand on her arm to console her. I needed to pay attention to the judge and my opponents but knew how difficult these moments were for her and that they would only get harder as the trial proceeded.

“Mr. Mason, the court tends to agree with Mr. Haller in this matter,” Ruhlin said. “How do you propose we rectify this issue? He is entitled to full discovery.”

“We can’t, Your Honor,” Mitchell Mason replied from the lectern.

“Rather than reveal our proprietary sciences, codes, and methods, we have offered the plaintiff a generous settlement package, but that was rejected so that the plaintiff’s attorney can continue to grandstand in front of the media with his wholly unsubstantiated claims and — ”

“Let me stop you right there, Mr. Mason,” the judge said. “Every plaintiff has the right to a trial. We’re not going to go down the road of judging motivations for settling or not settling this case.”

“Then, Your Honor,” Mason countered, “we are happy to submit to a court- appointed special master to review the materials we have provided and determine what is discoverable and what should remain redacted as proprietary.”

Now I stood to object, but the judge ignored me.

“I will reluctantly consider the offer in light of what that would mean to the court’s calendar,” Ruhlin said. “But for now, let’s move on to our next issue. Mr. Mason, you — ”

“Your Honor,” I said. “Before moving on, may I respond to the defense’s proposal of a special master?”

“Mr. Haller, I know your response,” Ruhlin said. “You object because you want to keep this case on course to trial. If you wish, you may electronically submit a cogent objection, and I will take it into consideration before I rule. For now, let’s move on. The defense has a motion before the court to strike one person from the plaintiff’s preliminary witness list. A person named Rikki Patel, who is a former employee of the defendant, Tidalwaiv. Mr. Mason, do you wish to state your claim for the record?”

Mitchell Mason was wearing a blue- black Armani suit with his signature patterned vest to complete the power ensemble. He had styled but short brown hair and a close- cropped beard just beginning to show some distinguished gray. That was how I told them apart. Mitchell had the beard. Marcus did not.

“I do, Your Honor,” Mitchell said. “As stated in the motion, Mr. Patel is a former employee of Tidalwaiv and upon leaving the company’s employ signed a nondisclosure agreement, a copy of which was submitted with the motion. Your Honor, very simply, this is the plaintiff’s attempt to do an end run around us and get proprietary company data and information, and we object strenuously to Mr. Patel even giving a deposition, let alone testifying in open court in this matter.”

“Very well, you may take a seat,” Ruhlin said. “Mr. Haller, I notice that you didn’t fi le a response to the motion. Are you withdrawing Mr. Patel from your witness list?”

I moved back to the lectern.

“On the contrary, Your Honor,” I said. “Rikki Patel is a key witness for the plaintiff. He was in the lab when this company birthed the AI companion they call Clair and set her loose on unsuspecting — ”

“Enough with the sound bites, Mr. Haller,” Ruhlin barked. “I have warned you. You play to me, not the people in the first row.”

“Yes, Your Honor…”

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Q&A: Michael Connelly, Author of The Proving Ground

    Publisher details

    Lincoln Lawyer #8: The Proving Ground
    Author
    Michael Connelly
    Publisher
    Allen & Unwin
    Genre
    Fiction
    Released
    21 October, 2025
    ISBN
    9781761473401

    Synopsis

    Mickey Haller has moved from criminal to civil court, but murder remains in his sights—in particular, the case of a chatbot encouraging the killing of a teenage girl.

    Mickey files a civil lawsuit against the artificial intelligence company responsible for the chatbot and instantly finds himself on the wild frontier of the billion-dollar AI industry. Grappling with a terrifying lack of regulation and data overload, Haller partners with journalist Jack McEvoy. But they are up against mega-forces, and even the bravest whistleblower faces grave danger.

    In 1997, IBM's Deep Blue defeated chess master Garry Kasparov with an unexpected gambit. In a Herculean new match of man vs machine, can Haller pull off a winning play for humanity?

    Michael Connelly
    About the author

    Michael Connelly

    Michael Connelly decided to become a writer after discovering the books of Raymond Chandler while attending the University of Florida. Once he decided on this direction he chose a major in journalism and a minor in creative writing - a curriculum in which one of his teachers was novelist Harry Crews.After graduating in 1980, Connelly worked at newspapers in Daytona Beach and Fort Lauderdale, Florida, primarily specializing in the crime beat. In Fort Lauderdale he wrote about police and crime during the height of the murder and violence wave that rolled over South Florida during the so-called cocaine wars.In 1986, he and two other reporters spent several months interviewing survivors of a major airline crash. They wrote a magazine story on the crash and the survivors which was later short-listed for the Pulitzer Prize for feature writing. The magazine story also moved Connelly into the upper levels of journalism, landing him a job as a crime reporter for the Los Angeles Times, one of the largest papers in the country, and bringing him to the city of which his literary hero, Chandler, had written.After three years on the crime beat in L.A., Connelly began writing his first novel to feature LAPD Detective Hieronymus Bosch. The novel, The Black Echo, based in part on a true crime that had occurred in Los Angeles, was published in 1992 and won the Edgar Award for Best First Novel by the Mystery Writers of America.Connelly's books have been translated in 31 languages and have won the Edgar, Anthony, Macavity, Dilys, Nero, Barry, Audie, Ridley, Maltese Falcon (Japan), .38 Caliber (France), Grand Prix (France), and Premio Bancarella (Italy) awards.Michael lives with his family in Florida.Michael also makes regular appearances on the TV show Castle .

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    1. Rolend says:

      Michael Connelly consistently creates gripping stories with memorable characters and suspenseful plots. Interviews with authors are always interesting because they provide insight into creative processes, inspirations, and the dedication required to produce engaging books readers genuinely enjoy.
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    2. Alex says:

      This excerpt immediately pulled me into the story. The courtroom tension, sharp dialogue, and contemporary AI themes created strong momentum. I am genuinely interested in reading the complete novel soon.
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